Comments for Underdog http://underdogtheblog.com beta testing a "no-nonsense guide to preparing for a life that matters" Sat, 17 Jul 2010 12:37:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ Comment on Feedback by Wildman http://underdogtheblog.com/feedback/#comment-15 Sat, 17 Jul 2010 12:37:47 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/#comment-15 Nice…. :)

]]> Comment on 1|disneyland by Wildman http://underdogtheblog.com/2010/06/25/1disneyland/#comment-14 Sat, 17 Jul 2010 12:36:47 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/?p=103#comment-14 I will take you to Disneyland anytime to show you how it’s done! :) Thank you so much for all your great edits. Immensely helpful.

RE: Christian Hedonism… Obviously, our motives are as important to God as our actions. But sometimes we have to “fake it ’til you make it” – start to obey even when we don’t feel like it. Once we’re in the flow of making good choices, the right motives will come. There are wrong choices, but thanks to the freedom we have in Christ, there are many, many options for being creative with our lives that still fall within God’s desires. The characteristics that make us who we are are part of God’s design for us, I think. :)

]]> Comment on Feedback by Alice :) http://underdogtheblog.com/feedback/#comment-13 Sun, 11 Jul 2010 20:51:50 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/#comment-13 Page 5 :)

]]> Comment on 12|a life that matters by Alice :) http://underdogtheblog.com/2010/06/25/12a-life-that-matters/#comment-12 Sun, 11 Jul 2010 20:46:56 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/?p=18#comment-12 Page 9: You switched to “Unidentifiable Faith-based Object” whereas throughout you were saying Unintelligible.

]]> Comment on 2|sam by Alice :) http://underdogtheblog.com/2010/06/25/2sam/#comment-11 Sun, 11 Jul 2010 20:45:10 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/?p=99#comment-11 Page 3: So far up *in* the clouds, maybe?

]]> Comment on 1|disneyland by Alice :) http://underdogtheblog.com/2010/06/25/1disneyland/#comment-10 Sun, 11 Jul 2010 20:42:47 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/?p=103#comment-10 First of all, I LOVE the Disneyland vacation story, I can completely envision this and I kind of wish I could have witnessed it!

Page 4, second paragraph, end of first sentence: I think you mean “maximum.”

Page 7: I *really* like that cloud of rust analogy… did I mention that already? :P

Page 8: A little Christian Hedonism a la John Piper… love it! In a completely unrelated side note, this also reminds me of the book Grace Walk, and the idea that when you are loving God first, you can do whatever you want, because what you want will mirror what God wants, so there are no wrong choices. I’m not sure I entirely agree with it, but it’s a comforting thought nonetheless. :)

]]> Comment on intro|rust by Alice :) http://underdogtheblog.com/2010/06/25/introrust/#comment-9 Sun, 11 Jul 2010 20:38:01 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/?p=107#comment-9 Page 1: “Everyone’s picked the Lakers…” No ” apostrophe-s” needed, and I’m not sure how I feel about the tense in that paragraph. Part of me thinks the “have”s should be “had”s, and “feature” should be “featured” for consistency through the story…

Bottom of page 5, I think you mean other *side* of the world. :)

Page 6: I love this sentence, “a puff of orange colored dust where a winner could have been” That’s good stuff!

]]> Comment on Feedback by Wildman http://underdogtheblog.com/feedback/#comment-8 Sat, 10 Jul 2010 02:47:20 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/#comment-8 Good catch! Do you have a page number so I can go back and revise?

]]> Comment on Feedback by mom http://underdogtheblog.com/feedback/#comment-7 Sat, 10 Jul 2010 02:22:46 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/#comment-7 Glad to get a peek! Just started perusing…

Did you mean strait? or straight? when referring to
“strait shooting”

Enjoying your work! Thanks for sharing!!

]]> Comment on intro|rust by Wildman http://underdogtheblog.com/2010/06/25/introrust/#comment-6 Wed, 07 Jul 2010 00:32:28 +0000 http://underdogtheblog.com/?p=107#comment-6 Thanks, Luke! You’re a sharp guy and a good writer, so your comments mean a lot. You know where to find the rest of the book, so help yourself… :)

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